This makes my submissions look like masterpieces!
The music didn't fit with the sequences. Therefore, it was pretty pointless. There wasn't really much animation, and some (if not all) layers of the drawings actually overlapped the static effect movie clip. The static movie clip was pretty annoying as well.
It's nice that you created a somewhat lengthy little story and put it into a storyboard. However, I think you need to focus more on the animation quality and the syncing of the sound.
I realise this is somewhat old, but it is newer than some of my own submissions, and it somehow has a higher score than most of my submissions. Guess I reviewed out of jealousy.