This defines crap as an art form.
You didn't use the stream option for the music. Huge mistake. You didn't sync the animation with the music. Even greater mistake. However, I can see some lip sync attempts. You came close at times. Just stream it next time.
Also, you got the lyrics wrong and dissed one of my favorite anime shows of all time. Sure, it was short, random, and almost pointless, but it was an awesome show. The song's a little crazy, I agree, but it does make sense if you speak both languages. In any case, Ride On Shooting Star isn't their best song.